Wednesday, 9 March 2016

THE TOWER OF BABBLE - BY ISAAC SMIITH

THE  TOWER  OF  BABBLE.
BY  ISAAC  SMITH


After Noah many other people were born. One day the king decided to build  a tower up to the heavens. The slaves worked harder and harder each  day to complete the task. One day the king started to brag to his people  about the tower. God got very angry so for their punishment he mixed up the languages and scattered the people all over the earth.                 
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown10 March 2016 at 14:23

    I like the way all your words are spelt correctly Isaac. I think you could add more interesting words next time. - Margot

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  2. Unknown10 March 2016 at 14:23

    I like the way all your words are spelt correctly Isaac. I think you could add more interesting words next time. - Margot

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  3. Anonymous13 March 2016 at 22:28

    I liked the way you ordered your story I think you need to use a bit more puncuation.I think this story is well done.I think you need to explain it the story in a way that people understand it.

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