My favourite animal By Kayla

My favourite animal is a tiger

They are sooooooo cute and they look really handsome or if it is a girl beautiful. But sadly they might die because of poachers. This is so sad for me but it may not happen after all which i think is good.

My brother

The Best Brother in the World

My Brother is the best brother in the world to be seen when you see him he will look so so cool you will
faint. He has a really cool face and hair stiale.

My cousen Daniel

My cousen Daniel and he is 23 year old and he is 2.54meter tall and he is going to the olmpes and he is swimming in the the200 and 100 meter races.

He is my favrate counsen in all 234 cousen he is my favrate

william g

hi i am William i like motorbiking and tennis and rugby  my favourite food is macaroni and cheese and ice cream .

Welcome

Welcome to Room 9 and our Blog for this year.

On this Blog you will find student's learning they would like to share. This also includes feedback about these pieces and what we are learning to do in our writing. 

That Was My Holiday

That Was My Holiday by Kiana

Remember how we saw the shooting star speedily zoom through the moonlight?

Remember how I heard the rolling waves crash against the crystal white sand at night?

That was my holiday.

Remember how I felt the cold waves run through my feet?

Remember how I had that salty taste when the waves came at me?

That was my holiday.

Remember how I thought of the cold crystal waves crashing upon me?

Do you remember when this huge massive wave came and I swam with it?

That was my holiday.

That Was Summer

That Was Summer by Lachlan

Remember how I felt inside when I finished my fish and chips, mmm… yummy?

Remember when I saw the hot sun lighting up the world?

That was summer.

Remember when I said “When are we going back to school dad?”?

Remember when I thought about my brothers?

That was summer.

Remember smelling my yummy dinner?

Do you remember when I went to the school pool?

That was summer.

THE TOWER OF BABBLE

THE  TOWER  OF  BABBLE.

BY  ISAAC  SMITH

After Noah many other people were born. One day the king decided to build  a tower up to the heavens. The slaves worked harder and harder each  day to complete the task. One day the king started to brag to his people  about the tower. God got very angry so for their punishment he mixed up the languages and scattered the people all over the earth.   

Hunting by Jonah

In March, I am going hunting at Waikaremoana for some deer. I have been hunting two times and this will be my third. I will be going with my dad and we will be staying the night in Rotorua or Waikaremoana. We hope we will get a Red deer in the bush. My dad will take his 222. I am really looking forward to it. The first time I went hunting was for Sika deer. The second time I went we were hunting Red deer.