Wednesday, 9 November 2016

The sad mouse

The sad mouse

Once about 10 years ago there was a village of mice who treated everyone by their abilities. It was rather sad for some mice who were jeered and teased because they couldn’t do the things the others could. The sad mouse named Philip was disabled,when he was young a cat just managed to get his front leg and he nearly died because he lost his paw. He’d never been able to do any tricks again. Philip limped home after another unsuccessful day and unlocked the door to his house made of cheese. He sat down in the armchair by the TV where he was about to turn it on,when he heard a deafening roar outside. Philip stared at the wall in horror it was every mouse’s fear, The Cat was Back! Philip was up and out of the door limping so fast it was like a mouse trying to stuff a huge piece of bree cheese in it’s mouth. All the mice were panicking and scampering around like crazy.

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The Mayor Mr. BigButt called for silence, throughout the crowd of mice there was silence and everyone had stopped moving and was listening “ we need some ideas of what to do” squeaked Mr.BigButt several mice put their paws up, Philip was trying to think of what to do when suddenly a blindingly bright idea dawned in Philip’s head. He raised his good paw. The mayor looked around not too many people he thought worriedly but then he saw another paw rise, it was none other than Philip the mouse who was attacked by a cat when he was young. “You there Philip what is your idea” “well” squeaked Philip who was determined to help the village “well cats are good at hearing and smelling us and the cat out there can’t see us so we should cover our bodies in mud from head to tail and then stay as still as a piece of moldy stinky cheese” “you’re right” gasped Mr.BigButt. So everyone scampered to the mud spa and ducked under. When everyone rised Philip squeaked “everyone stay still”. Half an hour passed and the cat was gone everyone stayed up late and held Philip on their shoulders. Philip became the hero of the village and everyone lived happily ever after.

The End

Sunday, 30 October 2016

What am I by Isaac

I have books on shelves and Lego galore. I make the best toy store for birthdays and more. Who am I, I'm thewitcouls toy store!!!!

What am I by Isaac

I have heaps of books on shelves , I have Lego galore. I live uin Botony but I'm not the toy store. To inform you I'm in the same building as the cinemas and ther is heaps of activities for you to be intrested in.................





                                          ...... I'm witcouls in botony town center!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                              

What am I by Isaac

I have heaps of books on shelves , I have Lego galore. I live uin Botony but I'm not the toy store. To inform you I'm in the same building as the cinemas and ther is heaps of activities for you to be intrested in.................





                                          ...... I'm witcouls in botony town center!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                              

What am I by Isaac

I have heaps of books on shelves , I have Lego galore. I live uin Botony but I'm not the toy store. To inform you I'm in the same building as the cinemas and ther is heaps of activities for you to be intrested in.................





                                          ...... I'm witcouls in botony town center!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                              

Wednesday, 12 October 2016

Our Awesome Media Ads



After all our learning about the media and how it works and influences us, we came up with our own companies, logos, products and adverts to try and persuade people to buy our products. Here are our print ads, broadcast ads and tv ads all in one cool clip... Enjoy! 



Monday, 12 September 2016

Smile face cookies

A easy and simple recipe to make

WHAT YOU NEEED

1.A plain bisket 
2.iceing suger
3.Eney coluer food coulring
4.bowl spoon

HOW TO MAKE

Step one get the bowl and pour the iceing suger and then put food coulering in (not to much)then mix once done get plain cookie and pour iceing p.s you just made iceing


Recopy for sunshine and summer

I invented this recopy for sunshine and summer so I could go to the
beach looking at the view on a wooden seat under a hut made of
trees and here is how I made it...........................................................





      Ingredients:

  • Sand
  • Waves
  • 2000,000,000,0 gallons of water
  • The sun
  • People from Los Vegus 
  • The letters S-U-M-M-E-R


Method:

Mix everything apart from the people from Los Vegus until it's a hot summers day in the bowl and take it out. Afterwards put the people from Los Vegus on the mixed summer day and there is your summer and sunshine!

:.)



Berry smoothies



  • 1 small boot full of berries
  • 1 barrel of orange juice
  • 1 spade full of ice 
  • 3 giant bananas

Method
  1. Get your blender ready
  2. Slice your 3 giant bananas in half and put them in the blender
  3. Get your 1 small boot of berries  [such as strawberries , blueberries and raspberries and put them in the blender as well
  4. Get your 1 barrel of orange juice and pour it in over the berries and bananas
  5. After you have finished putting in all of your ingredints get your 1 spade full of ice and throw it in
  6. Once you have got everything in turn on the blender and it will all  mix
  7. After there is no lumps in there pour it into a glass and enjoy

sunshine and summer


Sunshine lollipops and more that is not cloudy chance of meatballs it's summer fun summer is fun you can go to the beach to swim and play or make a sand karsil    

Sunday, 11 September 2016

Mouth watering chocolate summer and sunshine cake

Ingredients:
  • 1 bottle of Sugar  
  • 10 flower petals full of Sea water
  • 1 swimming shorts full of Salty sand   
  • 2 1/2 cups of Flour  
  • 3 trees full of Roses   
  • 4  Eggs  
  • 1 corked glass bottle of Sun
  • 1 spray can of Spray on tan   
  • 6 Happy clouds (only found in a cave at the bottom of Kawakawa bay's sea)
Method:
  1. First heat the oven to 200c and on bake. Then grab a large bowl and pour the sugar, salty sand, flour, 4 eggs, spray on tan and roses and whisk it up.
  2. Get the rest of the ingredients and put them into a small bowl and put them in the microwave for 1 minute to soften it.
  3. Blend the ingredients in the blender and then pour it in the larger bowl.
  4. Fold the mixture then put into the oven for 1 1/2 hours or until golden brown.

Serve to 1 ravenously miserable person!



Thursday, 8 September 2016

Why we should have erasers in our class!!

Why we should have erasers in our class!
                       
                                  By Tara Keals




Dear Mrs C,



i think that you should buy erasers in this class because then we will be able rub out pencil only and we will not make so much mistakes as much as we used to do and here are two more reasons why we should have erasers in our class.



My first reason is that when you make a mastake in pencil then you can rub it out easliy and not just make a messy cross out ( more like scribble) and   

Tuesday, 6 September 2016

Why should we buy pens


Why should we buy pens


Pens here and pens there. There is a world of pens to explore. Pens are useful and we use them a lot. They come in different colors and shapes when pencils are the same boring grey. We can use them for scribbled diaries important business notes or letters to other people in your family. But pens don't just come in different colors there is pens that smell and pens that even have RUBBERS so you can erase a mistake if you make one. So i have told you my reasons of why you should buy and I have one last thing to say " explore your new world of pens and buy one today"

Monday, 5 September 2016

Why we should have erasers

Dear Mrs Connolly

I believe  we should have this such fascinating  erasers they make our lives so easy  and it is so helpful.

There are several reasons why

Firstly these fascinating erasers are so helpful to our lives all we do is if we make a mistake we just get our eraser out of our pencil case  and rub it out how easy is that and you won't even have to cross it out and you can even get pen erasers so they don't only work on pencils.

Secondly when you are rubbing out stuff you won't see a pencil mark and there is even a type of rubber for big mistakes how cool is that they are also small so you don't have to try and squeeze them in your pencil case.

Last but not least there so cheap just go to eraser world we they have got all different types of rubbers like animals and all kinds of sweets like icecream  and lollipops. They have even got scented ones that smell so good like grape bubblegum ohhhh such a good smell I told you that they had lots of different kinds.

Now you know why we should have erasers


Saturday, 3 September 2016

Why you should by spoons

Why you should buy spoons

By Isaac


Imagine you're pouring your milk in your cereal and you go to the cutlery draw and find out that there's no more spoons left! Then you take a look in the dishwasher and there are still no more spoons left! Then you look in the recycling bin and it's empty and you realise that it's a Tuesday and the wheelie bin is getting picked up by the rubbish truck and you catch a glimpse of one of your spoons!
This is one of the disasters that YOU could have if you don't buy spoons and here are a few more reasons why you should buy spoons...

  • Spoons are very useful in most things
  • Spoons are mans 4th best friend ( Thats what I think)
  • Spoons were first made by the Eitnchent Egiptions in 1000 BC   
That is why you should by spoons

:)

Wednesday, 31 August 2016

Furniture

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Sunday, 28 August 2016

Why we should have couches  instead of normal chairs

I believe that we should have couches instead of normal chairs. Does anybody agree with me?

I feel that if we have couches we will want to do our work because we just go to our table and sit on a nice comfy chair and we will enjoy doing our work. We would like to be creative with things. People would like to come into our classroom because we have been creative with things and we don't have boring old wheelie chairs. who wants those? Who would pick the boring old uncomfortable chairs over these comfy and relaxing couches. We would have to keep ordering new furniture and we wont spend as much money because we don't have to buy as much chairs because couches can fit 3 people on.

If you are thinking of buying some couches for your classroom check out best funniture shop and plus if you don't want to come in store you can order online at best furniture shop and they are a bargin because they are having a sale.

Why room 9 should have better looking furniture

Why room 9 should have hammock-chairs instead of chairs  


"And so come down and by this limited edition chair almost everyone has one so get one now if you don't have one but if you don't have what it takes to come down you can order online at bestlookingfurniture.co.au so come in now!" Thats probably what a comertial for a chair would say but take a look at this one! "And so come and order online to buy this chair-hammock that everyone wants or call us at 0800 447 6890 to order now" Thats probably what a comertial for a chair hammock would say. Which one do you like better, the first or second? I like the second because it's got more quality and it's sounds better than a chair.


I think the hammock-chair is better because it doesn't have wheels and wheels can sometimes be very distracting

Room 9 should have hammock-chairs instead of chairs and to get them we will do our best to keep the classroom spotless.

Wednesday, 24 August 2016

zahra's olympics writ

ZAHRA'S OLYMPICS WRITING

 

I trained  for two  years finally  its hear 100 meter sprint. I got to the Olympics stadium and they said girls for 100 meter sprint go and get your clothes on now because you are running in 1 min so I rushed into the bath room and got my clothes on then I rushed  out and then they said girls that is doing the 100 meter sprint go there now so then I rushed over there and lined up. They said on your marks get seat CLAP! and off we when in first place was Zahra Watson then kayla vibert and lucy keals. I said to myself there is the line I am not giving up now I can do this so then I pasted the line I came 1sd I did it for my team then they gave out the medals and I said to myself look at the shiny round medal  come to me.

 

 

 

                            BY ZAHRA WATSON

Tuesday, 23 August 2016

Rio olympics My golden win By Kayla

Before

I have achieved a great thing I am going to the olympics to represent my country,my family,me. I am proud of myself of getting so far on my journey that I love, the journey of running. My major dream has come true. I’m nervous now as well, I know I will try my hardest but it doesn’t mean I am not nervous. I am about to do the 200m sprint. I’m changing into my clothes I have a giddy and reckless feeling in my stomach. It’s time to run!
During

I’m waiting I’m ready “Bang” that’s my signal to start. I’m sprinting hard out I’m in the lead “I can do this” I think over and over in my head I feel adrenaline pumping through me surging through my body like a tiger about to pounce on it’s prey.My legs are lead or jelly I can’t decide I can feel my heart racing my legs. And there it is the finish line a thin white strip. I can feel sweat trickling down my back. I’ve done it. 

After

I’m dizzy and emotional I have done it. I raise my arms in triumph I have gotten a gold. The ceremony starts I’m crying in joy. I’m exhausted and sore all over. I think I’m definitely going to collapse I’m so pleased with myself.I feel so passionate about my win  I get a gold medal placed around my neck and I know I have achieved my goal.
The End

 


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Monday, 22 August 2016

Gold metals



                                                         Gold metal


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Sunday, 7 August 2016

Rarotonga - By Siahn

On Tuesday the 24th of May after school we went to the airport to pick up Grandad Kevin. When we got to the airport my dad had to go to a meeting, 
so we waited at for Grandad Kevin's flight with my mum. My mum told us that his flight was had been delayed. Then my dad came, my mum asked us to sit next to each other and got her phone out, my dad had paper in his hands. They told us to read what the paper said, he held up one piece of paper at a time, it said WE on the first page, then we read the next which said ARE, the next said GOING, then TO and finally we read out RAROTONGA!!! I felt really blown away, so shocked and happy, my heart was beating really fast. I couldn't believe it. The last page was a picture of each of us smiling under a coconut tree, with the sun shining - it said YAY!!!! My mum told us it was a 4 hour flight and that's what we were doing at the airport, we weren't picking up Grandad Kevin. We had McDonalds for dinner and then waited to board our flight. We were so excited that we couldn't sleep on the plane.
When we got to Rarotonga a lady was holding a sign with SAFFRON CLARK on it, she put flower necklaces on necks, they smelled nice! She was the lady who owned the holiday home we were staying in. She drove us to the holiday home and when we got there we went straight to bed.
In the morning we went outside and I was so, so excited. There were coconut trees everywhere, it was boiling hot and felt like I was in a boiling jug. All of us were really happy and excited and saying "IT'S SO TROPICAL!! WE'RE IN RAROTONGA!!!!". My brother and I got a coconut from the ground right in our yard and tried to open it by banging it on the side of the tiles. We could hear the beach across the road, it sounded like it was right in our back yard. We got our togs and snorkeling gear and went across the road to snorkel. The water was so clear!!! And warm!!!

We had so much fun in Rarotonga! I really love Rarotonga! We did a lot of stuff. We went on Captain Tama's cruise which is a 4 hour snorkeling and island fun with games, shows, lunch and exploring a different island. We went on a big walk across the island - we started at one side and walked across to the other side. It was amazing, and steep, and fun, and scary - it was so high. At the top there was a needle which was really steep, the only way to climb it was holding on to chains, my dad did it, my mum was going to, but she didn't. We were shouting at her not to do it! We went on scooters, not the ones that you push with your foot on the ground, the ones like a motorbike. It was so windy and everything went in my mouth and nose. I loved it and would open out my arms wide as we flew along the road. We also we on kayaks around the lagoon, the water is so clear, like crystals, like blue crystals. We went to Highland Paradise, that's a island cultural night, we learned a lot about the island and the people of the island. We had lots of dinner and there was so much vegetarian and vegan food! Then they did a big show, with dancing and lots of loud drums, in the middle of it my tummy started to get sore, really sore. My mum took me outside and then the lady who worked there rang a taxi so my mum could take me home. My dad and brother stayed for more fun and dancing. Every morning we woke up and went snorkeling, we snorkeled all day some days. I saw a puffer fish, moray eels, flounders, so many amazing pretty colourful fish, one day a HUGE school of fish came and swam all around us. We fed the fish too, it was so fun and scary at the start, scary to have so many big fish all around us, fighting for food and jumping and flipping out of the water. One day at low tide we swam out to the reef and then walked along to the edge of the reef, we watched the really massive waves crashing at our feet. My mum got us new journals and we did journalling nearly every night about what we did that day.
I didn't want to go home. I loved Rarotonga so much. It made me feel so happy that I went there, I feel so lucky. I will definitely go back to Rarotonga one day!


Wednesday, 22 June 2016

My favourite animal By Kayla

My favourite animal is a tiger

They are sooooooo cute and they look really handsome or if it is a girl beautiful. But sadly they might die because of poachers. This is so sad for me but it may not happen after all which i think is good.

My brother

The Best Brother in the World

My Brother is the best brother in the world to be seen when you see him he will look so so cool you will
faint. He has a really cool face and hair stiale.

My cousen Daniel


My cousen Daniel and he is 23 year old and he is 2.54meter tall and he is going to the olmpes and he is swimming in the the200 and 100 meter races.

He is my favrate counsen in all 234 cousen he is my favrate

william g

hi i am William i like motorbiking and tennis and rugby  my favourite food is macaroni and cheese and ice cream .

Thursday, 9 June 2016

Welcome

Welcome to Room 9 and our Blog for this year.



On this Blog you will find student's learning they would like to share. This also includes feedback about these pieces and what we are learning to do in our writing. 

That Was My Holiday

That Was My Holiday by Kiana

Remember how we saw the shooting star speedily zoom through the moonlight?
Remember how I heard the rolling waves crash against the crystal white sand at night?
That was my holiday.

Remember how I felt the cold waves run through my feet?
Remember how I had that salty taste when the waves came at me?
That was my holiday.

Remember how I thought of the cold crystal waves crashing upon me?
Do you remember when this huge massive wave came and I swam with it?

That was my holiday.

That Was Summer

That Was Summer by Lachlan

Remember how I felt inside when I finished my fish and chips, mmm… yummy?
Remember when I saw the hot sun lighting up the world?
That was summer.

Remember when I said “When are we going back to school dad?”?
Remember when I thought about my brothers?
That was summer.

Remember smelling my yummy dinner?
Do you remember when I went to the school pool?

That was summer.

THE TOWER OF BABBLE

THE  TOWER  OF  BABBLE.
BY  ISAAC  SMITH


After Noah many other people were born. One day the king decided to build  a tower up to the heavens. The slaves worked harder and harder each  day to complete the task. One day the king started to brag to his people  about the tower. God got very angry so for their punishment he mixed up the languages and scattered the people all over the earth.   

Hunting by Jonah

In March, I am going hunting at Waikaremoana for some deer. I have been hunting two times and this will be my third. I will be going with my dad and we will be staying the night in Rotorua or Waikaremoana. We hope we will get a Red deer in the bush. My dad will take his 222. I am really looking forward to it. The first time I went hunting was for Sika deer. The second time I went we were hunting Red deer.

Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Jesus is Born by Leon

In a little town called Nazareth lived a young woman called Mary. One day an angel visited her. "You are going to have a very special baby- God's son ," he said. "You must call him Jesus." Mary was very happy. She sang a song to thank God. Mary was married to a carpenter called Joseph. She was expecting her baby soon. Joseph and Mary had to make a long journey to Bethlehem. Mary was very tired. There was nowhere to sleep in  Bethlehem. A kind innkeeper said, "Stay in my stable." So they did. That night, baby Jesus was born  in the stable. Mary made a warm bed for him in a manger. Shepherds were taking care of there sheep in fields near Bethlehem. Soon the shepherds and some wise men bless Jesus.



































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































Wednesday, 9 March 2016

THE TOWER OF BABBLE - BY ISAAC SMIITH

THE  TOWER  OF  BABBLE.
BY  ISAAC  SMITH


After Noah many other people were born. One day the king decided to build  a tower up to the heavens. The slaves worked harder and harder each  day to complete the task. One day the king started to brag to his people  about the tower. God got very angry so for their punishment he mixed up the languages and scattered the people all over the earth.                 

Thursday, 25 February 2016

Lachlan's Remember Poem

That Was Summer by Lachlan

Remember how I felt inside when I finished my fish and chips, mmm… yummy?
Remember when I saw the hot sun lighting up the world?
That was summer.

Remember when I said “When are we going back to school dad?”?
Remember when I thought about my brothers?
That was summer.

Remember smelling my yummy dinner?
Do you remember when I went to the school pool?

That was summer.