Thursday, 25 February 2016

Lachlan's Remember Poem

That Was Summer by Lachlan

Remember how I felt inside when I finished my fish and chips, mmm… yummy?
Remember when I saw the hot sun lighting up the world?
That was summer.

Remember when I said “When are we going back to school dad?”?
Remember when I thought about my brothers?
That was summer.

Remember smelling my yummy dinner?
Do you remember when I went to the school pool?

That was summer.

Kiana's Remember Poem

That Was My Holiday by Kiana

Remember how we saw the shooting star speedily zoom through the moonlight?
Remember how I heard the rolling waves crash against the crystal white sand at night?
That was my holiday.

Remember how I felt the cold waves run through my feet?
Remember how I had that salty taste when the waves came at me?
That was my holiday.

Remember how I thought of the cold crystal waves crashing upon me?
Do you remember when this huge massive wave came and I swam with it?

That was my holiday.

Wednesday, 3 February 2016

Welcome to Room 9's Blog

Welcome to Room 9 and our Blog for this year.



On this Blog you will find student's learning they would like to share. This also includes feedback about these pieces and what we are learning to do in our writing.