Thursday, 25 February 2016

Kiana's Remember Poem

That Was My Holiday by Kiana

Remember how we saw the shooting star speedily zoom through the moonlight?
Remember how I heard the rolling waves crash against the crystal white sand at night?
That was my holiday.

Remember how I felt the cold waves run through my feet?
Remember how I had that salty taste when the waves came at me?
That was my holiday.

Remember how I thought of the cold crystal waves crashing upon me?
Do you remember when this huge massive wave came and I swam with it?

That was my holiday.

2 comments:

  1. Room 9, what feedback and feedforward can we give Kiana on her writing?

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  2. Kiana I think you explained your holiday really well. Maybe you could add a few different ideas?

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